Hidden

Hidden are my feelings,
Hidden is my heart,
Hidden are the thoughts
That tear my soul apart.

Every time I look,
Every time I see,
Every time you smile
I think of what you did to me.

I hide away my anger,
I hide away  my rage,
I hide away everything,
I put them in a cage.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the feel of this poem. Most of us lock up our anger and disappointment. Cage is a good word for where the anger and rage goes. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Alz Alz]

I like the repetition in the words and I love how you broke the chain at the fourth line of each stanza... very interesting a great form! There is definitely a Meter in this poem and I think that REALLY helps the reader move along! The meter is fantastic, the rhyme helps it, and ALL of those components put together makes an excellent poem! It also helped me to REALLY enjoy reading this poem! 100/100

[Milinda_Moon]

I really like it. Very well written and it speaks to me. Great job!

[Leaner Pastures]

A very nice summary of how we react and store our reactions to how someone has mistreated us, whether they think they have or not. I like it.