Next Time

My thought process...

They use my work,
Then toss it away.
I say nothing,
Thinking that I will next time,
Next time I'll tell them not to,
Next time I'll fight back.
They do it again and again,
The next time of my dreams never comes,
I can never muster up the guts to say a word,
And each time passes.
I think
Next time I'll say something,
But I know I won't.
I'm a wimp.

Author's Note

So I'm using the same picture to show a sort of collection. I don't want to lose all the fantastic comments and I don't know how to move things to make it so that they stay the same... If anyone can tell me how, I would forever be in your debt!

Reviews

[Alz Alz]

Awe, i dont think the main character is a wimp... I like the other poem like this better. the "Used" one... but both are really good... 100/100

[VioletRose]

Okay Luna,
This made me 100% cry because that is just how I was when I went to school. I know all of the pain, I know all of the tears. And lastly all of the laughter from the people. I am and was a nobody Still to this day I am a nobody. This is SO sad because it made me remember my old Nobody life. it was all real...I was and am a smart girl but my work get copied like you said in the last poem! I truly just am speechless because I have gone threw All of this except for Abused...Sorry I have no way of telling you how to recover from that.
Wonderful write!

[melissa]

like i said yesterday your going to be on the best seller list one day!
great work:)

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the fact that you reference a next time, reveals your faith in yourself...in this
pride can survive

[Coyote Poetry]

Poem is strong as is. Better to stand your ground then be a wimp. Can do it with a smile too. Description and story was good in your words.
Coyote