How Will I Ride?

 

How will I ride?

Without my mount

How will I live?

If you are not here

Where will I go?

When it rains

If death comes easily

Then why am I still here?

Dead is my dog

Dead is my horse

Blood on the floor

Everything I live for is a mess

How will I love?

If there is no one to love

If the world is peaceful

Then why are there wars?

How will I ride?

Without my mount...

Reviews

[Kyle Francisco]

Your poem addressed many philosophical questions. The despair was evident and seems to reflect outside in. It became insightful and caused me to stop and think. Where would an individual be without purpose; I think that is the big question. With each passing line the poem became more interesting and then you ended with the question that it always returns to until someone finds what they are in life. Nice poem.

[LauraH]

DAMN! That is very good, it asks good life questions and maybe some people can relate so i give this 100 and I liked the way you repeated the beginning at the end again

[man Atek]

How will I ride ?

The question is the big thinking,
answer that and write on your poems
sure, these lines become interesting idea, what you want.