Simple

One Simple Poem :) ?! Any Toughs ?

Simple life
with simple meaning
Simple plan
with new beginning

Simple world
for simple people
Simple word
will solve the riddle

Simple answer
to the question
Simple is
to make suggestion

Simple love
to all creation
Simple is to look above
and pray in every situation

Author's Note

This I just made up today I think it is one of my best :)

P.S. Maybe

Reviews

[deeps]

Simple love
to all creation
Simple is to look above
and pray in every situation

Enjoyed this stanza, amazing poem

[G. Anderson]

Haha, I love it.

Except I'm not religious.

Nonetheless, great, inspiring piece.
~Gage Troy

[Allison]

this is pretty good!!! My only thing is that I would change suggestion to suggestions. I mean, it's your call. :~P

[Awaken the Sleepwalker]

I have to agree with you. This poem is amazing, and possibly one of your best. The repetition helps set a beat and a tone, and keeps the poem consistent. Consistency can be the downfall of a poem or it can be what gives the poem life. The latter is the case in this poem. Beautiful work.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Wow! How simple can life get, on a spiritual level life is simple, People make life difficult. I like this piece it’s very insightful. Excellent write.