awaiting

 

awaiting

 

 

I listen love songs
thinking of you
about your smile
kisses with tongue
eyes full of happiness
tickling
taste of your lips
I'm smiling to myself
cose your be right back

Reviews

[Lau Thiam Kok]

a short and lovely piece. but again, grammatical mistakes,

I am listening to love songs,
thinking of you,
the smile,
the kiss with our tongues,
the eyes full of happiness,
the tickling,
the taste of your lips,
and I am smiling to myself
because your will be right back.

A bit too "erotic" to me, the best love poems, never speak the word - "love".