fallen angel

 

Fallen angel

I may not have any wings

but despite of that fact

I am

angel

who fall down from the skyes

I lost my virginity

but got sence of humour instead

who would said

that I haven't took the best?

People all around me

longing to

not know me

so I still can hide

in a shadow of trees

I lie and I pray

I cheat and I swear

I love and somteimes I do care

Toxic emotions

killed in me

all of my kindness and good taste

I lost my place in

the heavenly choir

and now even my cat hides whenever I open my mouth

no

it isn't a life

is just a first step to hell

let's get some drinks

bartender!

please get me on more!

Again!

And again!

 

Paington 10.05.2008 @ 2:01

Reviews

[alternative_be]

I like the content and the images of this poem. Your message comes across loud and clear! This could be the perfect poem, but you do have some grammar issues here! I would like to help you out here, because this poem has great potential!

[Bryce Simonds]

but got sence of humour insted

instead*

all of my kidness and good taste

is that suppose to say kindness?


this was alright, it was kinda shaky though.
keep it up though, you have some good concepts.