kiss

 

for the greatest kisser world has ever know

 

kiss

my tongue has dried out

from frequency of your kisses

my lips are exchausted

from pleasurable attacks of your smile

I'm all but aching

but I want more

you're greatest kisser world has ever know

 

 

 

 

 

the day I will ever remember, Plymouth 2008

Reviews

[C. C. Burl]

ooh, nice. I like it. somebody out there is lucky to have this written about them. :) again, there is power in your words that I do not see elsewhere. great write! -C. C. Burl.

[Bluet_Belle]

I like this:)

ITs sweet in an odd way, and well written:)

A few spelling errors but they give it character and make it even more appealing:)

Kudos:P great write:)

[alternative_be]

Well, I guess there must be one lucky girl out there!