The Red Rose

The Red Rose has a story to tell....about love....

Spreading the Fragrance of Love;
Shaping the petals of beauty,
Blooming in the abyss of lonely heart;
The Red Rose touches the sense's;
To be tranquil, transcend the sky,
In the world of fantasy,
Where love floats like a dream.

Azure the sky,
Contrasting the Red Rose appears,
Noise transformed into Music;
A heaven was built within;
Thousands of flowers bloom day and night.

Seasons was a past glory;
Redness faded;
Fragrance never came out;
Petals was carried in the air;
Noises appeared;
The door of hell was opened;
The Red Rose dwell in the past memories.

Reviews

[Stefano Segnan]

The imagery is quite vivid, but you stop that easy flow in that last stanza with the constant use of the semicolon. It gives a sense of stopping all the time. That aside, I really enjoyed this poem.

[Solar]

A light beginning ending on a dark note, when the rose of life fades...

[Lydia Shutter]

Reflective love poem...a bit poignant. A love poem at the start, it ends in a darker place. Interesting to be sure. Lydi**

[StarlitOblivion]

Beautifully written, interesting turn for the darker side.
Well done!
If I may (grammar nut sometimes)
"Seasons was....petals was..." Should be were.
Other than that tiny grammar bit This Is Awesome!!

[aruntp Thalassery]

Thank you friend for identifying my grammer mistakes...My first language is not English...may be that contributed this....please check out my other poem...your review on grammer is encouraging...thank you.

[Kimberly Navarro]

This is a very sweet and beautiful poem just like the red rose you are referring to. I like it. Blessings

[aruntp Thalassery]

thank you friend

[Shei]

well done, very descriptive

[aruntp Thalassery]

thank you.. very much

[Anne Armitage]

I love this. Love the imagery :)

[aruntp Thalassery]

thank you very much