Go ahead

If you really knew

you'd see i dont mind

i don't care

your here

 

But go ahead

try to break me, use me

since your such a man

take all i i am

 

Go ahead and threaten

yell and blame me

say again you leaving

but you'll come beck running

 

Go ahead say it!!

you need me

the voice that lest you thrive

i am what keeps you alive

 

 

Reviews

[Cal Vance]

Say what you want......let your heart out thats how everything get revealed and people love what you do or are doing to your lovely life,keep writing honey,very good!

[Yaooooooo]

Go ahead say it!
you need me
the voice that let you thrive
I am what keeps you alive

Wow, you talk about love and the game that comes with it like you experience it first hand. I like it, i do suggest you remove your comment. The ignore the errors is fine but dont make up your readers mind before they write a comment, dont say it suck cause now the reader thinks the poem suck, maybe they loved it before they read your comment and now they mad that they read it. I hope you understand what im trying to say..
One!

[Roger Ferguson II]

XD nice ash, new should be knew though