I am time
A Poem by
Anshuman Aryav
I am time.
I am a game.
You all are players here,
And you all
play with me,
You all
follow a way with me.
It’s your decision
to make that way,
Right or
wrong.
It’s your
decision to make yourself,
Weak or
strong.
I am time.
I am a
competition.
You all are
competitors here,
And you all
fight for your future,
You do
everything for your bright future.
It’s your
decision to make your future,
Dull or
bright.
It’s your
decision to make your life,
Dark or
light.
But I am
just like garbage for you all,
Because you
waste me everyday,
But I am
time and I will waste you one day.
© 2017 Anshuman Aryav
Reviews
Wow Anshuman you have so much to tell, so much to express, I am really impressed with your writing, your imagination. At this age you write like this Im sure your flare is going to reach greater heights. Wish you all the luck and great time :)
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
Thank you so much dear..
I am glad that you liked it...
wow, so very powerful yet so true though.
Posted 7 Years Ago
wow, so very powerful yet so true though.
7 Years Ago
Thanks dear for your kind review..
7 Years Ago
not a problem
Great personification of time....and your words are true. We do waste time without thinking, but in the end, Time is the winner. Good write. Lydi**
Posted 8 Years Ago
Great personification of time....and your words are true. We do waste time without thinking, but in the end, Time is the winner. Good write. Lydi**
8 Years Ago
Thank you so much....for your kind words...
You hit the right ideas and how we should relate to time. Once it is gone, it is, so let us make the best use of the now. Bravo.
Posted 8 Years Ago
You hit the right ideas and how we should relate to time. Once it is gone, it is, so let us make the best use of the now. Bravo.
8 Years Ago
thanks dear...i am glad you liked it..
8 Years Ago
You are welcome.
Bravo for this one! So to the point and true. Thanks for sharing
Posted 8 Years Ago
Bravo for this one! So to the point and true. Thanks for sharing
8 Years Ago
thanks for reading my creation....
Nice.. And truly said.. 😐😐
Posted 8 Years Ago
Nice.. And truly said.. 😐😐
8 Years Ago
THANKS DEAR..
Your poem on time is perfect...brilliant use of words and the last line, i liked the most.
keep on writing.
Posted 8 Years Ago
Your poem on time is perfect...brilliant use of words and the last line, i liked the most.
keep on writing.
8 Years Ago
Thank you so much Priyanshi..
8 Years Ago
Always a pleasure.
Brother your poem was extraordinary. The time is precious, nowadays is not important. You gave a perfect lines.
Thanks for your poem.
All the best for you
Posted 8 Years Ago
Brother your poem was extraordinary. The time is precious, nowadays is not important. You gave a perfect lines.
Thanks for your poem.
All the best for you
8 Years Ago
Thank you so much friend for your lovely review..
"But I am just like garbage for you all,
Because you waste me everyday,
But I am time and I will waste you one day."
Just wow! These lines gave me chills. You truly somehow perfectly gave time the life in needed in here. Well done.
Sincerely,
CAPOLAVORO
Posted 8 Years Ago
"But I am just like garbage for you all,
Because you waste me everyday,
But I am time and I will waste you one day."
Just wow! These lines gave me chills. You truly somehow perfectly gave time the life in needed in here. Well done.
Sincerely,
CAPOLAVORO
8 Years Ago
thank you dear....just keep on reading my creations because your reviews and compliments inspire me .. read more thank you dear....just keep on reading my creations because your reviews and compliments inspire me to write more and more....
The end.... It's everything, that last line you wrote is my favorite and it's so true, such a beautiful write. Keep writing!!!
Posted 8 Years Ago
The end.... It's everything, that last line you wrote is my favorite and it's so true, such a beautiful write. Keep writing!!!
8 Years Ago
Thank you Anjali..
8 Years Ago
You are welcome!
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