Stranger, Would You Mind?

A message of a spellbound girl to a stranger.

Stranger, would you mind?

If I take the honored seat
     Next to your glorious throne?
Would you grant me the privilege
     Of breathing divine air as yours?

Stranger, would you mind?

If I dip my fervent fingertips
     Into your sea of golden locks?
Would you allow a mere mortal
     To caress your face carved like a cherubim?

Stranger, would you mind?

If I dare steal a kiss
     Just to taste heaven from your lips?
Would you accept my willing soul
     And take me now as your own?

Stranger, would you mind?

If you command your celestial crowd
     To suspend forever in this moment?
Would you trade your divinity
      And stay in this city bus with me?

Author's Note

Just another attempt in free verse. This poem was inspired when I was in a bus, sitting next to a gorgeous guy. :x

Reviews

[Susan McCaskill]

I love your use of words! When I first started reading, it seemed as if the poem was meant to be sarcastic. It's how I would have written if I was being sarcastic to a guy who looked like God's gift to women! Nevertheless, it's well written.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Hahaha. I could never think of any sarcasm to someone so heavenly. ;) Thank you, Susan for your encouraging review. :x

[Glen Yumang Manese]

The theme and the way you conveyed this works in the lines of this read...and seems an inspired write with what you say in your Author's note...

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Thanks a lot, Glen.. Indeed, I was inspired that day the heaven was personified next to me. :x

[Glen Yumang Manese]

you're welcome...