not all secrets are of gold

so tempting is a secret.

not all secrets are made of gold, 
yet they're tempting?
Twas a good secret, and lest it be spread
and sent through out the cosmos-
the vastness of cold vapid 
depth could then choked all of it's existence.

so again I say: not all secrets are of gold,

but they shimmer with the best quality

known to humanity- lacking the truth 

from another person, is just like a treasure

locked away from vast vapid deafening depth.

Author's Note

a sudden burst of inspiration. a friend of mine was keeping something that made him do a certain thing. he wouldn't tell me.... it made me so irritated but a little apathetic of why I wanted to know such a secret. secrets then are things not of gold, but far more worthy to a title grand" a treasure to covet after and be not content to hold back once had.

Reviews

[Pratik]

That was a wonderful poem..:) words so nicely composed and put together... and true! some secrets are best kept hidden.. somethings are not meant to be shared.. :)

[Emily B]

some secrets are gold

others may be baser mettle

[Dove]

What was your inspiration?? And this is a marvelous poem. At first i didnt understand it but as i cant reading I was like oh... thats kinda true. So great job.