like rain on window pane

thoughts traveled down like rain on window pane.

Dare I recollect the what if's-

since it might ruin the bliss,

enduring the pain within: 

the paused moment that testified

the cruel silence that screamed

true judicial execution of anxiety-

hence my sanity will break like glass.

Catatonic in decision, still in petrifying 

delirium, I dare recollect the rain that came

down my window pane- just as the what if's

that testified my silence's truth. 

Author's Note

this is meant to tell the feeling of how a person is unknown about a certain situation. I do this, I sometimes stand still, looking through a window, and think on what and how, and sometimes why. it just started to rain here, and I remember how rain drop-lets fall fast during showers. it's just like nervous thoughts that seem to over power all reason: like rain on a window pane.

Reviews

[~Blue Fantasy~]

Wow this is amazing! This poem says so much to me. It is very true the nervous thoughts that we have and they can move just as fast as rain drops. Wonderful write!! Thanks for sharing.

[V]

youve created a brilliant way to express yourself in this one. the use of words, the tone and rhythm are chosen very well.

[Pratik]

That is a wonderful poem.. an outstanding way of putting your thoughts to words..the way thoughts rain down and we try to sort them out into those numerous droplets of rain on a window pane.. excellent ! :)

[Dove]

I aslo stand and just stare out of a window trying to figure out whats going on or what happend. I like this poem it shows your creativiity. Great!