lost in time- but in a dream

lost in time- but in a dream, a memory can effect you.

nostalgic it must been, not at the moment

but now- had a photo shot gaze:

memories of what happened, or desired

to be lived again. a black and white bitter

sweetness, that had an colored wanting

that dared a second helping.

What a curse, to relive a moment

lost in time, but in a dream- a inner locking

of subterranean encampment. 

Author's Note

dreams can be something that has a bitter sweet wanting. i have black and white dreams, and most are colored- thou all the time, i wake up influenced and bloated by a second helping that i thought i could handle.

Reviews

[V]

good structure. enjambement, breaking a sentence and continue it in the next line makes the tone special. it really creates those black and white picture youre talking about.or even a grey one, merging the black and white parts together. i know this might sound a bit strange but its just what i felt after reading.

[Dove]

I would describe this poem as extremely interesting and you're right, dreams can have a bitter sweet wanting. Very nice write.

[EMMIE]

WOW SO THIS IS VERY INTERESTING. THAT'S TRUE DREAMS CAN HAVE A BITTERSWEET WANTING. NEVER HAD BLACK AND WHITE DREAMS...WONDER WHAT THOSE LOOK LIKE. GREAT WRITE!