"December"

In the month of December

When all things were

Frozen and cold

Me under my blanket

Was searching for the warmth

 

Luckily got someone

Whose presence was hot

She was far like sun

But her far presence

Was like a burning sensation

And in her far presence

In winter I felt that

I am in summer

 

Her eyes, her lips, her nose

All were red hot

And her breath was

Like a warm blowing wind

Her hot presence

Kept me warm during winter

 

This is how…I passed

My cold and freezing…month

December

Reviews

[Ellay]

I really enjoyed reading this poem! Loved it :)

[Asif Raza]

Thank you for reading and your appreciation!

[Ellay]

You're welcome :)

[Northern Woman]

Aw, I know how this feels. You have a talent in this! Great job :D

[Skai Rain]

A fantastic poem! I truly enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing.

[Asif Raza]

Thank you for your appreciation.

[Sami Khalil]

"Her eyes, her lips, her nose

All were red hot

And her breath was

Like a warm blowing wind

Her hot presence

Kept me warm during winter"

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning...:)

[Asif Raza]

Thanks for your appreciation...!

[Sami Khalil]

My pleasure...:)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

amazing poem, Asif! Seems you didn`t feel cold in the winter with the hot presence you had! Great description of feelings and contrast -hot and cold....

-nour-
July-013

[Asif Raza]

Thank you dear....for your lovely comment!