Lemon Grass

blades all stretched

thin!---- sharp!-----

truculent------------------

to any inexperienced touch.

 

like a mushroom crown

the wind tosses your gown

e,i,. green---generous

of a sweet morning scent.

 

this scent, could send

a gentle spell

to relieve any disconsolate eye

redressed with a verdant smile.   

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Miranda Richard]

Such raw emotion! wonderful detail and great potential. A well enjoyed poem ;)

[Belle]

I've read this in two manners. First with the title, then on the second reading I focused on the content alone and I did try so hard to detach from my mind the title, they worked both ways only that the second reading was more powerful and gave me a deeper meaning...Classmate, you never fail giving me amazement with your gift!