Fine With Pain

People who hurt themselves !

On my arm,Put a single line, 

To take my mind off the rage.. 

And now i'm fine..so "fine", 

Now my mind's on the pain!

Author's Note

Something that i wanted to share ! :) All suggestions are welcome..
I know many people could relate to this..And that's exactly what i'm hoping for ! :)

Reviews

[Emily]

So short but so powerful!
Keep it up!!

[Willard Wells]

People cut along with a few other assorted addictions for varying reasons. Finding focus to put that energy into your writing will be more beneficial to you. It will also give us, your readers the opportunity to read more of your excellent work. Bleed ink, not blood, Well done. peace be with you.

[Tiffany K Charles]

Cutting is something many of my friends when I was in elementary and jr high school........ I'm glad you found a very constructive way to put such an issue...... Well put and executed.....

[Greg Agee]

As always your expression is obvious. You grow and you never cease to amaze. One of my favorite writers, period.
As to the length, size doesn't matter. As long add the job gets done. Job done !

[TheMalady]

All I can say is, you're good in portraying feelings despite of how short your words are. I can totally relate to this.
Great job! :)

[Leran Vakem]

Fine = Freaked out Insecure Neurotic Emotional. I felt the pain in these few word.
Well written and thank you for sharing

L.V.

[andrew mitchell]

ouch! that hurts! nibe write ouch!

[idiotproof--1]

what a strong message for such few words. this is really great work. thank you for sharing

[pb]

damn..that it hurts...thats so true..u described me lol :D

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and direct words and thoughts. Pain does heal and redirect memories. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote