Scars

Yes.. I can see them clearly.. They Talk to me, 'They' the scars!

Now the lines have turned to scars,
The ones that reminds me of the past!
The ones that reminds how many times I've been angry..
Haha.. today I've been angry.. 
It's something I can't contain! 
I saw 'em.. the scars .. 
But today,I could contain!
Maybe it's 'cuz some things are not worth the strain .. 
Even though I'm hurt.. 
It's good that you've been open about it! 
It's good to know that I'm not not even worth it!
Good to know..Real 'good'..

Author's Note

New hope.. All my poems are connected if you read them right ;)
After a long time.. One more poem that adds to the tally :)

All suggestions are welcome.. :) Please do review so that i can improve .. :)

Reviews

[idiotproof--1]

good poem. at one point you say "The ones that reminds how many times I've been angry "The ones that reminds how many times I've been angry" I think you mean "The ones that remind how many times I've been angry" or "The one that reminds how many times I've been angry" otherwise this was a good read. I really enjoyed it thank you for sharing.

[Tiffany K Charles]

outstanding...... very well done young man.......

[andrew mitchell]

scars are reminders of the past, lessons learnt on life.

[matpat]

I love it so much! A lot of other people should read this! Good job!

[matpat]

By the way was it your birthday a couple of days ago, HAPPY BIRTHDAY!

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thank you so much.. finally i'm 18 😄

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked the open thoughts and honest tone in your words.
"Maybe it's 'cuz some things are not worth the strain ..
Even though I'm hurt"
The above is a lesson, all of us must learn. Thank you Aswin for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Emily]

'Now the lines have turned to scars,'

I just love this line!
Keep it up!!

[Blackheart]

It's really good. A few grammatical mistakes here and there but the message is well conveyed. Loved the concept between scars and life.

[Aswin R Prasad]

Please do point out .. :)

[Blackheart]

1. In the 1st line it should be 'turned into'. That gives a much better composition.
2.I think using words like cuz' is kind of not preferable in poetry. Try to use full words wherever possible.
3. Try to use I've instead of i've. Always capital I is used to address yourself.
4. Remind instead of reminds.

[Aswin R Prasad]

Thought you meant grammatical errors.. Is there actually any ?
And Reminds is correct too in the context.. ;)

I'll change the 'i' .. thank you :) Much appreciated :)