My Dream (I Found Kate Chopin at the Bottom)

I’d rather face this time and time again than feel this way

Floating in the ocean
Swallowed by the waves
Exasperating for air
Reaching for surface
Feeling the pressure push through my chest cavity
Water infiltrate my airway
Rolled eyes
Clenched hands
Open mouth
Rigor mortis

Reviews

[Luna]

This is absolutely amazing. I am speechless to how u portrayed it. At first I was'nt so sure but as I read it it sure gave me a strong punch in the face. Can't help but comment. I loved the way u smoothly went with the flow and created a story like situation. Sorry don't know how to explain my feelings.I am just talking gibberish lol. Anyway i loved it .Keep writing ur heart out:)