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A Poem by Audrie

Continuity-discontinuation-critical events

cleanliness

smoking dirt- anxiety

what? what? children - rodeo parade

water- smoke- water - medication

breathing cars stoned

idol questions and dancing gnomes

fish-trains and blue smoke

and this feels like dr. suess poetry

deception - love - f*****g-

positions and accusitions and spelling work=ds correctly

© 2010 Audrie

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Alz Alz

very... interesting... a little hard to understand but I feel that if i really took the time to pick through it, i could find some deep personal meaning. Very interesting style! 90/100.

Posted 15 Years Ago

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Added on February 2, 2010
Last Updated on September 3, 2010

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Audrie

tucson, AZ

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I love to create as far out and as far in as my mind can take me. I love all forms of creation. I enjoy writing because I know that the works will always reside within me and nothing can destroy a t.. more..