Going... Going... Gone

The realities and similarities between losing your mind and losing a loved one...

Shaking off the balance
Pieces are thrown left and right
A hamster in my head
Pitches forward and turns the wheel
Never stops
Layers have been shed, the cocoon
Planetary rings reverse
And we collectively decide
Whether to choose to relive those days
Or implement new ways
And plant our seeds
Buried within those dreams

A feverish frenzy- my neck grows hot
As I sit awake and wonder
Why those who've gone
Were always deemed forgot
A see-and-say
A seance for display
Those doctors will serve punishment
Somehow, somewhere
Some way

Reviews

[Valentine]

I have lost many loved ones at a very young age..but have never felt like this..a baby, a sister and 3 brothers..all younger than I am now..God gives and He takes away..blessed be the name of the Lord..Life goes on..it is up to us to pick up the pieces..And as for illness...I am disabled with " Neurocardiogenicsyncope" have a history of seizures, am wearing a unit now for a smashed spine..still I praise the Lord as it could be a lot worse..I could be a sinner doomed to hell..By His grace..I'm going to be with Him and my loved ones..Valentine