Saliva

The train roars across the horizon
an explosion
a booming base shakes
Reverberates
Absorbed like a sponge
Tight
Tendons rein in tension
Balled-up fingers bones clench
Connect:
I want to make you see stars.
Ice boxes and deserted regions
Unexplored
ceased the pink pills and then
my womb re-opens
Once more.

Reviews

[Honeypot]

Ok, maybe its just me, but there seems to be definite sexual undertones to this. Its raw and coarse, but totally enchanting. I'd love to hear what it means to you? Great job on this. Its rather cryptic and gets your braining jumping.

[deadpool]

well, as far as evoking mental imagery, this was very mental...on a physical level :)~ i enjoyed it