In the Woods

The evergreen, the Ponderosa, the Sequoia

Tower so high, so great,

So high they reach out to lightning fate.

High up, birds hover near the nest;

Far beneath them, peace and quiet gives us rest.

They even hide us from the stars,

From Venus, Jupiter, or Mars.

 

We tranquil land bound creatures search,

Enveloped in our tree-branch church;

We are so impotent, so puny, frail,

Surrounded by these trees and trail.

We rest on beds of branches and leaves,

As if to hide from bandits or thieves.

 

Truly memorable this short nature tour,

A momentary gift … a lure,

Then back to life’s reality … so soon,

Under the watch of a friendly moon.

Now daily chores and obligations

Erase the pleasure of man’s primal sensations.

The rustic forest shall wait

Those who search beyond heaven’s gate.

 

Reviews

[Chris Shaw]

I very much appreciated this nature write, being that way inclined myself. I also write about similar subjects. I enjoyed the rhythm and rhyme in your poem. It sounded good when read out loud. You created some very pleasant imagery and I enjoyed the experience. Well done.