If only I could...

Pause.
that day
when my heart was
electrically shocked
by your
heavenly smile and
sparkling eyes

Record.
those manly voice
like a classical music
playing again and again
in my head

Capture.
that enigmatic stare
and adorable smile

Backward.
the day I'm
yearning
to pause

Fast Forward.
the day when 
I'll be walking in the aisle
and you waiting for me
at the altar
to tell our vows and I dos

Play.
the music of love
beating so fast 
to the tune of
FOREVER.

Reviews

[Rene Salinas]

As soon as I finished the word sequence came to me. I was brought back to that class which i can't remember a thing but the name Sequential Logic and that bee said brings me to this writing it is dictated by a sequence by strangely enough with unsequestial data. The eyes that provoke a smile. The manly voice. The adorable smile. Let hold that image for a little while please. Can you marry me? Life in love everafter.

The most unsequentially sequenced logic yet it made sense.

Thankyou

[Broken.buddy]

You have used the keys on a tape recorder to express a past memory. I absolutely love that structuring and simile part and the way you have thought of using them both into the same poem. 'If only I could', The question which we all ask and wish that it would be true one day.

Enjoyed this poem. Thank you for being here on Writers Cafe