No title, unfinished

Not finished. Reminiscing on someone I cared about.

Roses are red, violets are blue

I had nothing to do

So my thoughts ran to you

Well I remember a time

When our bodies would rhyme

Author's Note

Opinions? Comments? Much appreciated.

Reviews

[Holiday Sparkle]

I would maybe get rid of the first line, and then continue the poem.

I would write:

Nothing to do
Thoughts began to run to you
An earlier time,
When our bodies would rhyme
.......etc

just an opinion

[Chris Smith Welshpoetcs]

This would be a good message for a valentines card ; )

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the poem. Sometime when the mind had free time. Nice to go back to rhyme and good memory. A excellent poem.
Coyote