My heart's letter..

Feeling..curious.

God,

When is it my turn?
You know, love...?
When can I have someone?
I've waited, so long.
I have so much of myself to give..
Why? Why am I the only one?

Sometimes I think it's me.
That I cannot be loved.
Because, maybe,
I am too broken inside..
Is that true God?

I look at others. I look in awe.
To have that, I..
I am really trying to wait but,
-God I am so alone.
Maybe I'll never have that;
Love.
Maybe I'll never have all I want.

The only thing I want..

I believe you have a plan for everyone,
I just sometimes wonder if..
-If you've forgotten..me.

Author's Note

Ever just have a thought or feeling and you just need to write about it, not even in great detail but, just write something?..well that's me tonight. Not my best efforts but all reviews welcome anyway, I do really appreciate every single one :)

Reviews

[Suvada]

Sometimes I wonder all of that too, but I love it keep it up :)

[The Twin Arenas]

Not the only one, buddy boy.

you should ask handsome fella, though. not old cloud man.

[Jennesis]

I feel your questioning and longing here...

[keeanaaaa]

I love this. It's very relate able. You can feel the honesty and a twinge of pain in your poem. Awesome job!

[ayejodie]

Thank you! :)

[Rea Sky]

Well! You've done it again. A poem that makes the readers go nostalgic and look back to where they have felt this certain emotion again. Yes I,myself, have experienced this exact thoughts and with that fact, I loved this poem because It's honest, factual and very personal.

[ayejodie]

Thank you so much! :)

[Jerome F Knox III pseud..]

you stated that it is not your best but I beg to differ...it is brutal honesty and that is sometimes the best poetry one can deliver.....your not so best still is your best.....

Sometimes I think it's me.
That I cannot be loved.
Because, maybe,
I am too broken inside..
Is that true God

I love these lines and the ending was perfect


I believe you have a plan for everyone,
I just sometimes wonder if..
-If you've forgotten..me.

[ayejodie]

Just so you know, I absolutely live for your reviews. I adore your feedback, it is such a boost and it is so heartwarming. Sometimes I read them multiple times! Really, thank you! :)

[Lizardo]

I feel and think about this a lot of times, This is very truthful, I love this poem
I can feel the emotion around it.
Great work!

[ayejodie]

Thank you very much :) Your feedback means a lot!

[DoormanDan]

I can 100% relate to every single word of this poem! I have felt this away many times before(and still do from time to time). The word flow of this poem is fantastic, and the poem is written out brilliantly. Good job! Keep up the awesome writing! :)

[Cool Girl]

I totally know that feeling! Great poem! Nicely penned!