Waiting for You

Keep Dreaming..

My messy hair and paint on my nose,

You look at me and smile.

Finding humour, because I am totally unaware of it.

Painting the walls of our castle. 

We sleep in our day clothes,

On the couch that will seat many memories.

Completely intertwined,

I am protected.

You hold me and my past under your wing,

And promise to never let go. 

After years, I am happy.

You have finally found me.

The saviour I have begged God for..

Every bad day worth these moments.

You know me.

And that is all I have ever wanted...

I roll over in bed and try to never wake up.

As I perfect this dream, that keeps me alive.

Reviews

[Katie]

I love the way your words seem to paint a picture a really wonderful picture !:)

[wezev511]

Love the ending - kind of bittersweet. Something sad, but hopeful too...
Nicely done!

[Jamestown]

I definitely enjoyed this poem, it is well written and peaceful for sure.

[Ana B.]

Truly beautiful piece of magic! Stunning writing :)

[Jerome F Knox III pseud..]

This poem here is how and why I became a fan....

On the couch that will seat many memories.
Completely intertwined,
I am protected.
You hold me and my past under your wing,

A great set of stanzas here

[Confuser]

Great job. I loved it! It is wonderful - the peacefulness and happiness is devine, and love the ending too. Thank you so much. Dale

[Jennesis]

Nice job. It surprised me at the end. I didn't expect it to be a dream. I love the line "on the couch that will seat many memories".

[DoormanDan]

This is a really really REALLY great poem! I'm sure that many people can relate to this piece in some way. I love this piece, it is truly beautiful :)

[Lizardo]

Been through that! I perfect dream and then you wake up, man that feels terrible.
Amazing piece, I really like the emotions on it
Wonderful piece of poetry!

[Cool Girl]

Absolutely beautiful! The emotions and hints of sadness at the end. I loved it! Amazing job!