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Do you know how badly
I wish for all of this to end?
The breathing
The thinking
..the living.
I cannot indulge in what others find
Happiness in,
Because I am trapped in my world.
This invisibly unfortunate hand I've been slapped with.
To breathe takes every energy from me.
The sluggish flow of blood being forced to go on.
I am already dead.
-Dead inside my shell.
Left here amongst the loudly living.
And I wish it would stop,
To sleep in peace forever.
-In silence.
Everything to nonexist.


Do you know how badly...I want it all to just f*****g end?

Reviews

[Zoomout]

I feel you here as well , your writing touch me deeply inside

[Mayank]

This is an really sad and painful feeling and your words conveyed it best... good work.

[tessa victoria]

When I read your poem, I completely was able to understand, relate to it.
It reminded me of a time I went through and your words just created the picture perfectly into my head.
I honestly love this poem!

[Katie]

Your poem is a wonderful piece and I look forward to reading more work from you.
I'm also sorry if this is how you may be feeling.
I hope you see how amazing of a writer you are.
Here is a random quote
"Fantasy is a necessary ingredient in living, it's a way of looking at life through the wrong end of a telescope, and that enables you to laugh at life's realities."
Dr.Seuss