Tender

Ayla and I really bond on trips. Keeping the love in mind...

you give me

then two become we

love so free

Author's Note

rhyming lune

Reviews

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

He gave me
Then two became one
Again
Love so free
Loved me ........................

I am not much on form and such .. But I know, and like what your words express ......... take care ..
Jazz

[?]

Those three line speak such volume..such depth
I agree "Tender"

[...]

. magic ...
. beauty ...
. and ... poetry ...

[Ed Hart]

a lune tune
with just enough room
honey moon

[Marie]

Very good haiku. Love your form.

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Three lines that speak a million- love is like this.
Very lovely~ how are you?

Chloe

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful message in 10 words. You are amazing. When two become one. Great fireworks are the possibility. Thank you for the outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Emily B]

it is beautiful, word and thought

[quinfinn]

concise and complete, lovely and tender...well done!