anvil

musing

she was hard,

like an anvil.

darn near impenetrable.

and deep inside,

the molten hate,

could never breach 

those iron walls.

life lived thus,

so sad, indeed.

Reviews

[Marie]

Yes., that is very sad. This ties in to some other poems you've written, doesn't it?

[Lily Mae]

It always makes me wonder when I see people like this.. what took them to this place..and mostly what kept them there? But I wonder alot lol so.. You did a great job putting words to many peoples faces that I've known...xo

[Larry Dyson]

I like it john..few words ..expressed a miles worth of hate and discontent..each word well chosen..LAury

[Ed Hart]

sad indeed

[Mauricio Montoya]

I once knew someone that this would fit.
Nice work.