haze

I remember, I think...

stoned in solitude

memory evaporates

before it happens

Author's Note

I wrote Pulitzer quality poetry back in the day, and promptly forgot every last word...


Senryu

Reviews

[Donald Meikle]

stoned is solitude
and your description is right on (as I remember it)

[J.J. NIGHTINGALE]

I can relate .. I like your Senryu ..

Peace Out .. J.

[Coyote Poetry]

I understand this poem. Haze is my permanent state now. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[...]

. wow ... stunning ...

. absolutely stunning work ... "stoned in solitude" is unforgettable ...

. so is the image of memory evaporating before it happens ...

[Desert Dreamer]

I really like this one, it pulls me in two directions. First, I feel sad about lost memories, and then I feel the solitude and am happy to live in the moment.