Intro

The blood was on my hands. Beth was dead blood was pouring from a slit in her thought. And I was left wondering what went wrong. That was when the cops came in. they have allowed me to have a pensile and paper. I want my story known. I want people to know I didn’t kill her.

Reviews

[Phillitup]

Grammatical errors but there are always bound to be a few. Brilliant and intriguing, I'll have to read more...

[writingurl14]

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[GunMetal]

Strong intro.

It's short, but it's still nearly full of grammatical errors. These sort of things take away from the story, so be sure to practice it, and review your work more critically.

[writingurl14]

thanks...