I Wonder Were

like before it exsplains its self

I always sit and wonder were I'm suposed to be,

Is it here on this earth or am I to be free,

I always sit and wonder were,

Cause I never really know how many people really care,

                         Am I Dead

                        Am I Alive

 

I dont know how long I will surrive,

Sometimes I want to die and go to heaven,

Cause I feel left out and not to pleasent,

I'm scared to death of life its self,

 

Cause I dont like the life the devils delt,

I ask God to please forgive me,

I need to go to heaven were I know I can be free

 

 

By Belinda Draper ( Bageant)

Author's Note

i dont know what to say about his one maybe some one can help me figure it out...

Reviews

[Brenda Sue]

Outside of some typos and grammar mistakes this is a very moving piece. I love the message. Wonderfully penned.

[Kevin Andros]

This poem states your inner self of confusion and nervousness that you clearly feel. But as I've said before, now-a-days, I don't think anything bad will happen to good persons with all the science and technology. This poem is very good.

I think that YOU meant the title to be "I wonder Where" rather than "I wonder were"

You keep fogeting about the capitalization.

~KA~