Am I Invisible

exsplains it self

Am I invisible does anyone see me,

 

I’m sitting here alone in the computer room,

 

Is there something that I am missing,

 

Or is our final days done,

 

I cant seem to figure out all that I’ve done wrong,

 

For people to keep me invisible from there eyes,

 

I don’t like to have to sit alone and cry,

 

Were is everyone now when I need you,

 

You all don’t really care do you,

 

I don’t have the presences of your love,

 

To help me in life and carry me through,

 

I only see you when you need help,

 

But I’m invisible to you any other time,

 

I now see that in life I don’t need you,

 

So please forget about me,

 

Just let me be free for you I can no longer see,

 

Your invisible now to me.

Author's Note

I dont know what to say about this poem I need your imput cause I have been on writer block latly....

Reviews

[Mr. Lopez]

I SEE YOU !!! And you cannot hide! :-) I know this feeling of invisability. When the whole world turns and you stand still. When the whole world laughs while you cry still. This is when you have the opportunity to create. When emotions overflow the damn that we hold them in with. Let it flow my dear ... let it flow.