A Lovely Revenge

I'd give anything to see you smile.
Your smile is evil, for it holds lies within.

To listen to your voice I'd trade the world.
The voice of a cold-hearted person.

I'd drive miles to see you.
You're holding a knife.

To feel your arms around me I'd give everything.
You have meaningless hugs, and a plan for revenge.

I'd die if it meant you could live.
It's too bad I died by the hands of your shady actions.

Reviews

[Dareen]

Very nice; if only it had been longer, more evil, more hurtful: it would have been a masterpiece.

[KAREN]

Very nice and well written! You can feel as you read this how this person loves the other, but dosen't get the love back!