I Remember

This is about The Gospel of Jesus Christ. Please, feel free to read on.

I remember the feeling I felt,
Knowing I'd been betrayed.
Knowing my apostle had given me up,
Told them, so he could be paid.

I remember the garden so fair,
From which I prayed to my father.
And how I bled from every pore,
From then on, my life was a bother.

And lastly, when I hang on the cross,
The people watching me lie.
I took all their sins, saved their souls,
But still, they left me to die.

I saved all of the wold's sins,
And now, in heaven, I see,
People doing my fathers will,
wanting to be like me.

Author's Note

If you couldn't guess, this is from Jesus Christs point of view. I hope you guys like it. I want you to know that the gospel is true, and I know that it is deep in my heart.

Reviews

[Gee]

Hmmm, if they had worshipped a cabbage back then and a 2000 year old story made of it, would you have believed that and worshipped too ??

[Raj Sahu]

Oh! It's really beautiful and amazing. I like it's plot and style. You penned it very well. May Lord bless you. Amen. 😊

[Farrsight]

Thank you very much!

[Calibaster]

You're right. This is really cute. :)

[Farrsight]

I know!!!!!

[Calibaster]

No really, rhythm problems, ... Well yeah, but seriously, CUTE!

[Farrsight]

What rhythm problems?

[LunarSong]

I love it. It's a good thing Christ had such an eternal perspective. Love the last stanza.

[Farrsight]

Thanks, I really liked that last stanza, too. So.... Wonderful.

[LunarSong]

Haha, yep.

[Farrsight]

Yeah. Now I just need to get esther to read it. She also had me read your story crossover thingy.read moreYeah. Now I just need to get esther to read it. She also had me read your story crossover thingy.

[LunarSong]

Haha, did you read where I had Dustin and Cort take over the Enterprise? It's getting really interesting.

[Farrsight]

No, I haven't read that yet, but I read Cort and August, and I read a little of Kett and whatserbucket.