come back

I look around

I see people rushing by

by it doesn't register in my mind

the only thing that does

is that SHE is gone

She left on the train

but..

I didn't have the strength to ask her to stay

now she's gone

and i'm here alone

i wish that i had

gotten the courage to ask

her to stay

i miss her already

please

someone bring her back

back to me

please

my love

come back...

to me. . .

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[Song of Mercy]

Beautiful. How many have lost someone they love and not been able to think of any thing else. I really like the line

I see people rushing by

by it doesn't register in my mind

really well done, you captured a feeling known by many and visable to those who do not know it.
Great Write. Barb

[BULLET FOR MY VALENTINE]

Is this a fantasy or a real story either way one has lost the most profoundly important person in their lives here and your words of despair have the stir of echoes impact on the reader well done and thanks for sharing now come on over and visit me at www.booksie.com/bufferdude