be bold.

be bold.
     Christ, I wish you would just
     grasp this by the horns –
     grasp me.
Please
     just stop hiding
         behind your old-fashioned
     pretend morals
     and say it –
        what we both know to be true
You,     you on your pedestal
     want me
     need me        love me
    almost as much as I do you
be bold.
     take me.
                           I’m waiting with half-closed eyes
                                    and rough breathing
        for the feel of your arms,
         the caress of your lips
        the press of you, warm and smiling
         at my side at night
     I dream.
be bold.

Reviews

[bunny nabber]

yes, seriously huh?

[RAWR!]

u should have put the last thing "be bold"
in bold text.
duuh - even i figured that out.

[Amor-de-angel]

I likethe layout, I like the flow and the simple pleading. Good job.

[Eagle Cruagh]

I hardly know how to review this piece.
The writer could be more bold, is this a one man
world ? Where only the man has a say in romance ?
Not sure about the subject matter, but the writing is
superb. Every t is crossed, every i is dotted and it is
interesting, exciting, imaginative and profound.
Keep writing, please !
----- Eagle Cruagh