HAIKU 10

HAIKU 10

A Poem by Father Mojo

 

the moon aimlessly
moves through the vaporous night
begging for loose change

© 2008 Father Mojo


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It was better than "Cats," and it was better than "Haiku 9." Haiku 9 left me somewhat wanting. :)

Good write.

-Gabe


Posted 17 Years Ago
This is great!!
I don't have any change, go way!!

Posted 17 Years Ago
the reversal in the third line makes for an interesting and original haiku.

Posted 17 Years Ago

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 Added on February 11, 2008

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Father Mojo
Father Mojo

Carneys Point, NJ



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