Time Means Nothing When I'm With You

Love is stronger than time and it keeps blossoming throughout the years.

I want to be near you when the sun goes down,
taste your lips and feel your arms as they abound.
Whisper sweet-nothings until the fall of a mornings dew
covers the earth to sparkle with zillions of hues.
Time means nothing as we enjoy finding ourselves;
it's as we're greedy with the moments we delve.

Times together are silver and gold combined
as we treasure hours of knowing our love's devine.
We taste of the goodness's we both share,
forgetting the world and ridding what's unfair.
We believe in our love and what transpires
not trusting those who stir up lots of fires.

Our respect for one another is strong and sound,
it's built of a foundation that'll not fail or fall down.
It's pure as the honey filling a honeycomb,
wanting a person to rob its hive to take it home.
We'll live our lives together for as long as we live,
sharing the moments together that God did give.

 

 

Barbara Kasey Smith - Copyright@2013 

Reviews

[bela]

A beautiful romance poem Especially the last two lines.

[Barbara Kasey Smith]

Thanks for reading Bela - I do appreciate you!!

[Mark]

Always refreshing to find another poet for whom rhyme and meter are are important parts of the process. I will be reading more of you. Before I extend a friend invite, may I ask what your feeling at well-intended critique is? Open, in review block, or via PM only? Or, not at all!

[Barbara Kasey Smith]

Thanks Mark - your poetry enhances poets to write with energies and exactness - I don't mind open reviews at all because that's one of the important factors in poets receiving input to enhance their writings.

[steppenwolf]

Hello Barbara, nice to meet you.
Yes that's how it is when you love somebody so much.
My and my husband's wedding anniversary is approaching--36 years--and this poem puts into words my emotions at this time. Thank you.

[Holly Mason]

yes we will all share the moments that God did give...great line
nicely written truly like the honeycomb comparisons
interesting to read
thank you for sharing