Unintended...

Somehow I feel I've known you

Ubiquitous within my world

Knotted together in mysterious ways

Right down to our soul

Inconceivable to you it may seem

To me you're becoming my whole

Illusions in my heart, cloud.

           

 My feelings for you they grow...

Author's Note

Free verse...lots of thoughts clouding my mind.

Reviews

[Touché Armada]

If you could gather some raining in those clouds and drop the from the skies above me right about now that would be something terrific.
In the poem, it's quite passionate, you have been growing as a writer sinse my last stopping by the cafe.

[Reneé H]

Really powerful! I liked your word choice and the flow of it :)

[B. Maaitah]

the sentiment is genuine and the rhyme is very soft and delicate and it goes perfectly with the whole story-line.. it's very enjoyable to read :)

[DIVYA]

This poem carries the freshness and ardor of a young, new love. Very well done! Thanks for sharing!

[Brianna Brie]

It says a lot for a short poem. Enjoyed reading it.

[A. H. Pinley]

Illusions in my heart, cloud? Illusions cloud my heart, emotions?

[Carolann Dowsett]

Lovely, it's beautiful when you feel so good with someone that it feels like you've known them forever. Nicely written.

[Lily Mae]

I love the heart cloud.. nice..x