I still stand...

Lots of people talk,

but only few of them know,

the confusions and sadness,

that within me grow...

I feel so numb,

I feel so cold,

Yet I stand

and just never loose hope!

Author's Note

ehh..

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

This is simple yet an everyday battle that I think many can relate to. The rhythm and flow of this shows where you may creatively stand today.. but with that light of hope still shining down.. that is so very important! Numb is not being without feeling.. it is a mix of emotions usually caused from feeling too much (for me anyways).. I've been numb many times in my life.. and these days with so much media hype full of negative.. many I think are numb and desensitized by sooo much. This was an honest outpouring that finds great strength in the ending.. that I found inspiring from the inside of your poetic heart! Thank you so much for sharing!

[shadadakiya]

i like this because i can relate to it its been a long and crazy year many have hurt me but still i forgive them all and i still have hope that everything will work out for the best for us all only god knows the hurt and the pain we all feel from time to time but through the ones that do show kindness it make up for the ones who never really cared so that we don't loose hope love this im sure you will add more to it its great!!!happy new years

[deeps]

Very well said and just a few words.
I like this, wonderful flow as well.