Memories...

"Flipping through the pages of my past,
Staring at the beautiful pictured memories
I made with you years back.
A breeze of nostalgia wraps me
and my lips curl up into a smile,
as I pause over an image of you.
Those feelings still so fresh,
subsided for so long,
yet ever so pure."

I just want to take this moment
to write down to you.
My words may not be perfect
but I wish to pass them through.

You were a beautiful friend,
and will always be...
We might not be here tomorrow,
or might not have time to free,
I will always cherish knowing you,
and I hope, you will remember me...

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This was raw, raw emotions penned down on a piece of paper (or computer screen)
I mean, forget about the flaws regarding the structure or the flow, this is much beyond any flaw...This is raw man, extremely raw! And that I why I extremely loved it.
"A breeze of nostalgia wraps me
and my lips curl up into a smile,
as I pause over an image of you." - This was very heartfelt and painful at the same time..
Loved it!

[Stephanie]

My words may not be perfect
but I wish to pass them through.

It seems to me your words always fit together perfectly. It's something I really admire about you. This is a beautiful yet sad piece. Whoever it is, I don't think they've forgotten you :)

[Siddartha Beth Pierce]

Lovely thoughts - nostalgic memories do bring to mind how important it is to cherish those close to us always. A great moral expressed here. Thank you so much for sharing.
Light,
Siddartha

[Dallisa <3]

Amazing! it flows extremely well. looking back on the past can be hard, but maybe its for the best? i really enjoyed reading this piece!

[Alysha]

I too have those kinds of friends. This poem truly envokes visions of one's past. It brings about sadness for having lost the friend but inner peace for having had the chance to know them. Vary beautiful. Keep Writing.

[Brianna Brie]

Love this poem!! It is so pure and loving. Nice job!

[EpicKizzy]

amazing lovely write who could ever forget you?? :)
♥krystle♥

[funeralmoon]

this was a beautiful piece , absolutely amazing. great job

[Stephanie990]

absolutely beautiful

[Jason]

truly remarkable write. Beautiful.

[Aussie]

Awwwh,this was so sweet and caring.Loved it.