Vengeance....

Your constant ignorance,

wont break my stance…

I would still walk to you,

i will take my chance…

Close ur eyes,

or run away...

but you'll open your heart,

to me someday…

You're giving me this pain,

and its growing each day...

my love is vengeance,

and i'll have it my way…

Each word you said,

to me was a lie...

I will hurt you now

but wont let you die…

You'll feel my pain,

with each breath you take...

You'll burn in my hell

for each mistake…!!!!

Author's Note

not based on any experiences...is completely fictional....jus tryna burst outta bad writer's block...

Reviews

[Alana Michele]

Good, but i feel that the rhyme (though not forced) is cutting off from its potential. try experimenting with different styles of poems.. One thing that helps when i have writers block is finding words that either mean a lot to me, i just like the way they sound or hold a lot of feeling.. Thesaurus.com is a great start :]

[Brianna Brie]

Fiction or not this poem is all too real to me. It breaths the love/hate relationship so well. Splendid way to chip away at that writer's block!

[barricade]

Thank you so much for the kind review. your words mean a lot to me :)

[N. N. Grainger]

Oooooooh! Always so angry Mr Barricade...I wonder what is the cause for your eloquent fury?

[Sukriti Suki]

I like this..good one.

[sisyqueen2008]

I love this. As a matter of fact, I love it so much that I've shown it to someone I know to cheer them up. I love this....just like all your other work, as always. :)

[Vaishali..^_^]

wow..!!ITs baeutifull..!! :)
great write..!! ^_^

[Marie Harrison]

Love it. I can feel the push and pull. This attraction and repulsion. This love/hate relationship. But, in reality you should probably flee relationships like this for they never end well. Great write!

[StacyPerry]

This work was something that I was lost in from start to finish.....in a good way. Nicely done.

[Just Plain Me]

I agree with PK! Me likes it very much to :D