State of the dissidents

It starts with wordplay

Lock you like dissidents

Look at them now

Over hear-say

If we're presidents of our desires

Then you're really puppet rulers

Crafted to be admired

 

Through the screams, it would seem

The whole worlds consciousness

Should be bursting at the seams

But these dreams

Just steady streams

Subconscious imagery

Telepathy, from corporate machines

 

The subliminal

No longer need messages

Your uprisings

Deemed irrelevant

Let's eradicate the hate

And safety for us all

Starts with locked gates

 

Grown to love

In a world of scams

Everything they say, is all that I am

They say

The truth's too bitter

Guess that explains

Why my thoughts run basic

Reviews

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Relevant writing and brilliant structured poem. I love all words you used, you have a gift in writing, the ability to draw the readers and engaged in this piece. You have a stunning words selections. Thanks for sharing this wonderful work. Keep kicking Bro.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A most celebrated and highly constructed piece that needs to the read again and again.

[Mike Emil]

have never been arrested for any of my theater work
that I all slander and lies
HAI!!!

[SyberRose]

Nicely done Pollai...well written...the other two were unpublished and I couldnt read them...Rose

[Pollai]

Thank you Rose :)

[Sami Khalil]

"If we're presidents of our desires

Then you're really puppet rulers

Crafted to be admired"
I like the thought and the whole poem...:)

[gombeggar]

needs an edit of grammer and punctuation

[Pollai]

Thank you, any particular areas you found which needed heavy editing?

[gombeggar]

just bits here and there...look for them...a good writer learns to find his/her own errors...u will learn by doing