Champions

When the lights go dim

All hope seems slim

Show no whimpers

Simply whisper 

A scream in your breath,

Courage comes from within

Even champions

Have human hearts 

Beating in their chest

Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

A powerful message dressed in a simple poem. Wonderful!

[Idealistic Annie]

"Even champions
Have human hearts
Beating in their chest"

Love this, flows so well !

[Rogue]

I like the thoughts you put into this. Very well rounded and put together.
Thank you for sharing. :)

[Pollai]

No, thank you! For stopping by :)

[Angi]

We seem to think Champions have no fears or doubts. We forget they are human, too. Loved this short piece. Angi~

[Pollai]

Thank you Angi, glad you liked it :)

[SyberRose]

Nicely done Pollai...yes courage does come from within...Rose:)

[Pollai]

Thank you Rose :)

[lMarling]

short but poignant. This is well written.

"Even champions have human hearts, beating in their chests". Awesome.

[Pollai]

Thanks, glad you enjoyed it :)

[Sami Khalil]

A very good rhyming poem with a hidden message. Well penned...:)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Raw and honest captivating poem. Thanks for sharing.

[Pollai]

Thank you :)

[Marc Marlon Villaflor]

Welcome :)