In oceans deep

In oceans deep

A Poem by B.J
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Water droplets make ripples in the ocean

As the rain falls from the sky

No wind to make waves

The great unknown

In oceans deep

 

Oceans water like glass

Creates a mystery

In oceans deep

When the ocean rises

So does my heart

Into the great unknown

 

My heart embraces the ocean

Calling me to the water’s edge

The great unknown

Feet trembling

“Feet don’t fail me now”

You will be my guide

In oceans deep

 

Water droplets make ripples in the ocean

As the rain falls from the sky

No wind to make waves

The great unknown

In oceans deep

 

My feet take me deeper and deeper into the water

Spirits lead me trust, taking me deeper and deeper

Into the great unknown

The oceans depth

When the ocean rises

So does my heart

© 2014 B.J


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"Oceans water like glass
Creates a mystery
In oceans deep
When the ocean rises
So does my heart
Into the great unknown"

Posted 11 Years Ago


Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

My pleasure...:)...................
B.J

11 Years Ago

:)...................................
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

:).................
"Into the great unknown
The oceans depth
When the ocean rises
So does my heart"

Softly romantic and longing. You are enchanting your readers even with the great unknown. Excellent...:)...................


Posted 11 Years Ago


B.J

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words
Sami Khalil

11 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)....................

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B.J
B.J

South Australia, Rural, Australia



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I live in rural South Australia, among the best wine district in the state. I enjoy dabbling with words, seeing what I can create. I appreciate creative reviews. more..