The darkest night

The darkest night, thro' the noises of the night

A lone star glowing intermittently, this darkest night

Suddenly a distant light, firing like a projectile

Circling, like a blinding light, a sight rarely seen

The fantasy of life, blazing

Trails of light, blazing across the night sky

A message from out of this world

A dream held within a darkness

A life held within your heart

Held, within your dream

You see tomorrow, where?

A land where Joy displaces sadness

A land where you, float, unaware

Of a lifetime on another land

Like riding on a cloud, unaware

You feel the ocean waves

Crush against your chest

A love that flows, turning emotions on a tide

Than when withheld oceans of emotions

Music plays the dream

Circling, like a blinding light, a sight rarely seen

Eyes so bright and enlightened in one vision

On a night so dark, circling like a blinding light

The fantasy of life, blazing an arrow thro' my heart

Blazing a story of life, beholding beauty

A love lasting forever, so pure

In a land that displaces sadness with Joy

Author's Note

Trying to write something lighter

Reviews

[yesidid]

yes the longer i had to smell old wolly the longer the night got bj
you are a great writer thank you for letting me vent about old wolly

[B.J]

Your most welcome my nights will be long when my dogs pass away to so I understand

[yesidid]

yeah I'm gonna miss old wolly

[B.J]

thoughts are with you

[yesidid]

well i just posted one about old wolly

[B.J]

you have a fun page

[yesidid]

thank you b j i love old wolly

[B.J]

:)>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

[W R Stowe]

Almost seems a vision of heaven with your last lines good rhythem

[B.J]

Was trying to create something will go with that sound great. Thank you so much for your kind comment

[W R Stowe]

your quite welcome

[Butch Decatoria]

Enjoyed this write, even in the darkest places one can find the light, and your yearning for joy and wonder under your Aussie sky is evident of better things to come. I felt you soaring in this one, words I'm sure can barely describe. Kudos.

[B.J]

It was a great feeling writing in the poem across the blue skies of Australia

[Sami Khalil]

I'm beholding the beauty and immense meanings of your wonderful writes. Leaves you with great impressions...:)........

[B.J]

Thank you so much...your kind words mean a great deal

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome muchly...:).....

[ANTO]

So much intensity - so much action - so much delightful imagery and what pace...!
I was dizzy after this lol
A good journey on a fine vessel - thank you B.J.

[B.J]

your most welcome.. your comment means a great deal to me

[wordman]

well you wrote a beautiful poem here

[B.J]

I was thinking about re: programming the brain and that is what I came up with:)>>>>>>>>>>>>

[wordman]

sounds like you done it

[B.J]

:)>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> Thank you now I have to keep it going in the right direction

[wordman]

you can do it,i have confidence in you