Exuberant Joy

I created 2 versions of this poem and liked them both. So here are both versions.

The sun's warmth and light

Children playing and laughing

Exuberant joy

 

The sun's warmth and light

Water fountain, gentle sounds

Exuberant joy

Author's Note

I'm curious which version you like better. It was a difficult choice for me to pick one.

Reviews

[T]

I loved it both, Bonnie! The first one gave me such a wonderful feeling since I love watching my children laughing and playing, the exuberant joy it brings. The second one for me is, when the children leaves and it's quiet enough that you can hear the gentle sounds of a water fountain and the exuberant joy that brings as well ... I loved it! Beautifully written ... hugs