Lines

 Connecting the fallen lines

Forcing them to fly

Watching them fall

I pick them up

And raise them again

Reviews

[deer-heart]

Very short, but I don't think it needs to be longer.... "forcing them to fly, watching them fall" was a phrase that struck me. It's something we all do, isn't it? The first three lines all beginning with ''-ing'' verbs was really effective. It gave me a sense of repetition, as though these are things s/he does over and over, an endless cycle, and then resignation in the last two lines.
I like.